Higher order concerns (HOCs)—the global or “big picture” aspects of a paper. These aspects of a paper are often associated with a writer thinking or writing process. Revision for these concerns usually requires the writer to make substantial changes.
Lower order concerns (LOCs)—the more local aspects of a paper that can be corrected on a line-by-line basis. These aspects of a paper are often associated with the product that the writer creates. Revision for these concerns generally requires the writer to make small, relatively quick changes.
This presentation and workshop will assist all who are interested in writing consultation with determining the best approach when assisting a writer.
Michael Frizell is now in his 10th year as a lecturer and director at Missouri State University.
Michael currently serves as the Director of the Writing Center, located in the Bear CLAW Center for Learning and Writing. Now in his fifth year as director of the Writing Center, Michael provides programming for classes, departments, and organizations on all aspects of writing and study skills. See the Writing Center's website (http://writingcenter.missouristate.edu) for more information.
Michael is also the Director of the Supplemental Instruction Program, now in its second semester at MSU. SI is designed to assist students in classes where the D, F, or Withdrawl rate is at or around 30%. For the fall 2009 semester, SI programming will be offered in 26 sections ranging from mathematics to the social sciences. For a full list, visit the SI website (http://si.missouristate.edu).
In addition, Michael is Director of the In-School Players. In-School Players are a small cast of Missouri State University students who travel the local elementary school and Springfield Public Library circuit to bring live theater performances to children. Created in the fall of 1984, the cast consists of six to eight members who present 40 to 60 performances of stories, poems, and music per school year. It is estimated that the In-School Players Touring Group has entertained over 500,000 children since it was formed. The group claims to be able to perform anywhere such as classrooms, libraries, and playgrounds, and offers Tuesday and Thursday performances. Other performances include S.T.A.M. (Speech and Theater Association of Missouri) Conventions.
